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Final Stages of Self-Editing: 6 Steps

Jul03
2011
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Writing and Editing There is so much involved in self-editing; the lists and checkpoints can fill a book. But, in this article we’ll look at how to do a final once over. These are steps to be taken after you’ve proofread and self-edited the manuscript and had it critiqued, checked for grammar, storyline, punctuation, showing, etc.

1. Read your manuscript.

Read it again. Try to read it slow and watch for all the self-editing tips you’ve learned and think you’ve applied. Spotting one’s one errors is difficult since we know what we wrote and intended. Some of the other tips here will help with this problem.

2. Change the font and read it again.

Surprisingly, you will spot errors you just glazed over before. You won’t run through it the same way you did with the original font.

3. Read each paragraph from the last sentence to the first.

This is an interesting method for an additional self-edit. It’s helpful because your brain won’t be on auto-pilot. You will spot glitches within sentences that you would glaze over when reading normally.

Note: I don’t mean reading each sentence backward; read each sentence as you would normally, but read the last sentence first and work your way to the beginning of the paragraph.

4. Check formatting.

Now it’s time to check the formatting of the manuscript.

Are your paragraphs all indented with proper punctuation?

Did you use the Show/Hide function in your word processor to check the inner workings. For instance, years ago the proper spacing between sentences was two spaces. Now, the protocol is usually one space between sentences. The Show/Hide function displays a dot for each space.

Is your manuscript double spaced?

Did you use the correct formatting for dialogue?

Check all the aspects of manuscript formatting.

5. Print your manuscript.

Okay, I know what you environmentalists are thinking . . . I’m one also. I try very hard not to waste paper and protect our trees. But, there is a difference between reading on a computer and reading a paper copy. I’ll be honest, I don’t know why our brain perceives it differently, it just does.

As you’re reading your manuscript, use a colored pen or pencil and mark the text you find errors in. Once you’re finished go back to your computer document and correct the errors.

The other practical aspect of this process is it’s a good idea to have a hard copy of your manuscript near its final stage. Unless you have an offsite backup, you can’t be too careful (I’d be skeptical of this also – you never know with any online system whether it will crash). I’ve lost a number of files when my computer broke. And, I’ve even lost files on zip drives when the drives failed. So, from experience I’m cautious when it comes to saving my work.

6. Go Green.

Another step to take if you print a copy of the manuscript and you don’t feel the need to keep it is to recycle it. I reuse paper I print by using the back for notes, or I let my grandkids use it for coloring or painting. When the paper can be discarded, I recycle it if possible. If you’re concerned about your valuable content being usable to others, you can rip it into pieces or shred it, then recycle it.

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Other Writing Articles:

Is Your Manuscript Ready for Submission?
10 Great Writing Article Links
6 Last Minute Steps to Self-Editing and Submissions

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Please check out my July Walking Through Walls Virtual Book Tour Schedule at:
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Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for 4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

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http://DKVWriting4U.com
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Tagged editing, proofreading, self-editing, writing advice

6 Last Minute Steps to Self-Editing and Submissions

Jun18
2011
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So, you Think You’re Ready to Submit to a Publisher or Agent? Read this first.

You’re at the final stretch. You’ve done everything you could think of to get your manuscript ready for submissions. You’ve used all the self-editing tricks you learned, such as changing the font and reading it again, printing the manuscript out and reading it yet another time, and reading each paragraph backwards. Now, you’re at the finish line. But, before you cross the line, here are 6 last minute steps you should take into consideration

1. Check formatting

Now it’s time to check the formatting of the manuscript.

Are your paragraphs all indented with proper punctuation?

Did you use the Show/Hide function in your word processor to check the inner workings. For instance, years ago the proper spacing between sentences was two spaces. Now, the protocol is one space between sentences. The Show/Hide function displays a dot for each space.

Is your manuscript double spaced?

Did you use the correct formatting for dialogue?

2. Get your manuscript edited

When you think it’s perfect, have it edited before you start submitting it. Yeah, yeah, yeah, I know, you think this step is overkill, and it will cost money. You’re right on the second part, it will cost money, but it will be money well spent.

No matter how many times you self-edit, and how many times your critique group goes over your manuscript, there will be errors. Ask around for a reputable editor.

3. Create a log line

A log line or pitch line is a one sentence description or your manuscript. This may take a bit of trial and error, but, it’s important to master.

4. Create a synopsis

A synopsis is a short description of your story. Be sure your writing should is tight and focused—leave out the fluff. The content should be, at the very least, self-edited and proofread before sending it off to an agent or publisher. You are trying to grab the reader’s attention and let the reader know that you are grammar literate.

Basically, the synopsis should briefly let the editor know what the book is about: the beginning of your story, your main character’s needs or wants, how he strives to reach his goals, the obstacles/conflicts in his way, and how he overcomes the conflicts and moves forward to the final outcome.

I read an interesting article recommending that your synopsis should be created using your detailed outline.

5. Create a query letter or proposal

A query is a sales pitch. It should be three paragraphs and only one page long. The first paragraph quickly and interestingly describes the story; it’s the hook. The second paragraph tells a bit about you, your qualifications for writing the book. And, it’s a good idea to include a bit on how you intend to help market the book. The third paragraph is the conclusion; keep it short.

6. Final Step: Submissions

Okay, your manuscript is polished and shiny, now it’s time to submit. But, hold on . . . check each publisher’s guidelines before you submit.

In fact, don’t just check the guidelines, you need to study them, and follow them implicitly. If a publisher asks for submission by mail only, don’t email your submission. If the word count on an article or story is up to 1000 words, don’t submit a story with 1150 words.

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Related Articles:

4 Tips for Final Stages of Self-editing

6 Stepping Stones to Publication

3 Steps to Querying Publishers and Agents

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The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 4nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

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Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals

Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing and Marketing
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
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Posted in Freelance Writing - Tagged editing, logline, manuscript formatting, manuscript submission, synopsis, writing advice

Outsourcing Articles – Is it Right for You?

Jun12
2011
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Recently, a writer/marketer who always has valuable information recommended outsourcing as a means of effectively and quickly getting a number of articles written. He was using a particular service to create a niche site for affiliate marketing, but it can be used just as effectively to create visibility and traffic to your own sites and products.

The marketer stated that he paid $3 to have articles rewritten and distributed to hundreds of article directories.

Wait a minute . . .

While I’m sure this is true, guaranteed the rewritten articles are not done by professional writers. It’s possible the writers or spinners are using a rewriting/spinning program.

A rewriting program chooses random words to change, or the author creates a list of words for the program to find and change. Some can also rework paragraphs, but it’s not the same as a writer. These programs can’t tell if they’re missing the mark on clarity in the content, or if they are changing the meaning.

Outsourcing these types of articles is similar to purchasing private label rights (PLR) articles. PLRs are articles that you can buy by the bundle at a low cost and use with your own byline.

But, consumer beware. You may have an embarrassing situation on your hands if you don’t proofread and edit the articles before using them. Often, these articles are rewritten by non-English speaking writers, or writers who are overly concerned with quantity over quality.

Remember, it’s the content that creates the organic traffic funnel to your site. You should offer your visitors/readers quality content. And, now that Google took steps to reduce spam sites, it’s even more important to have quality content.

But, for those of you who don’t mind having to edit each article, PLRs or outsourcing on-the-cheap may be an option. Certainly, there are some writers who feel it’s easier to rewrite an existing article than create one from scratch.

Some of us are on the other end of the outsourcing chain. We ghostwrite or rewrite articles for marketers or others who are looking for quality content. As professional writers, we know the importance of creating quality over quantity. If you want to create an impressive article utilizing facts and quotes, and shining with clarity, you can’t use rewriting programs, or writers who aren’t professional.

One important factor as a writer is that your writing is a reflection of you and your writing ability; it should always be the best it can be, whether you are writing for yourself or for a client. The same holds true if you are hiring a professional writer to ghostwrite articles for you; unless you’re very familiar with the ghostwriter’s work, be sure to proofread any content you’re publishing before hand. Remember, your name will be associated with that content.

Depending on your writing needs, you will have to decide if you want quality or quantity, if you choose to outsource.

If you are an affiliate marketer, it’s all about getting as much traffic as possible to a niche site that has a copy ad landing page urging the visitor to BUY. The more traffic the greater the chances of sales and an affiliate commission. Conversion rates rule . . . quality often takes a back seat to quantity. But, again, the search engines are cracking down on fluff or spam sites, so be sure to take that into account.

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Related Articles:

The Ghostwriter and Businesses
The Ghostwriter and the Individual
Freelance Writing: An Additional Path to Income

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

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If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

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Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing and Marketing
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

Posted in Marketing - Tagged Marketing, outsourcing articles, rewriting programs, spinning articles

How to Create an Ebook – FREE Workshop

Jun05
2011
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How to Create an eBook

Writers on the Move is hosting a free one-hour live chat workshop on creating an ebook and what you can do with it.

It will be presented by Karen Cioffi on June 24th, 7pm EST (U.S.).

E-books are an amazing product that has multiple uses. And, it can be created at no cost, or for a very minimal amount. What else can you create that costs only your time and effort, and sells for whatever the market is willing to pay?

There aren’t many products that fall under that category. And, along with the ‘right price,’ e-books are easy to produce.

Workshop topics:

1. Creating an eBook: 5 Simple Steps
2. Offering an eBook for Free
3. Offering an eBook for Sale
4. About the ISBN, Copyright, and Creative Common License Info
5. Promotion Tips and Article Links

This workshop will give you the know-how to actually create your own ebook. And, all registered attendees will be given a 19 page ebook: How to Create an eBook and What You Can do With It. This is an easy to follow guide covering all the topics of the workshop.

The link to the ebook will be sent upon registration. Hopefully, you will get a chance to create your own ebook and then let us know how you made out in the workshop. It will also give you a chance to think of any questions you may have.

In case you can’t make the actual workshop, hopefully we will be able to get a transcript of the chat and provide it to any registered attendee who requests it.

To register for the workshop please email Karen at: karencioffi (at) ymail (dot) com and put “Workshop” in the subject line.

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And, if you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

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Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for 4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing and Marketing
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

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Posted in Business writing, ePublishing, Freelance Writing, Marketing - Tagged create an ebook, create ebooks, e-books, ebooks, free workshop, inbound marketing, make money writing, promotion

Walking Through Walls Video

May28
2011
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Children's fantasy story Well, the publication of my children’s fantasy chapter book is taking its final lap. Thanks to Aidana WillowRaven, Walking Through Walls now has its first YouTube video.

Check it out at: http://youtu.be/90aJO5qHHWc

Here’s a brief synopsis of the story:

Walking Through Walls is based on an ancient Chinese tale and set in 16th century China. Twelve year old Wang dreams of becoming rich, powerful and feared. He studies the legend of the Eternals, a group of mystics who are known and feared for their amazing magical feats. When he is sure they are real, he journeys to their home in the Loa Mountain and begins an apprenticeship with the Master Eternal.

Unfortunately, Wang does not have the patience or moral fiber for the long and arduous undertaking. Before he leaves his apprenticeship, he gets the Master to teach him one magic formula – walking through walls.

The book is scheduled to be available for sale on July 1st and I’ll be soon working on a couple of virtual book tours. This is part of every author’s ‘must do’ marketing strategy in order to create visibility for the book.

Stay tuned and I’ll keep you informed as to what marketing steps I take to promote my book.

You can check out the blogsite I created for Walking Through Walls at: http://walkingthroughwalls-kcioffi.blogspot.com

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing and Marketing
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

Posted in Marketing, Writing for Children - Tagged book promotion, children's book, fantasy story, Walking Through Walls, youtube video

Freelance Writing – An Additional Path to Income

May20
2011
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Freelance Writing
Many children’s authors or book writers in other genres realize that making money writing books may not be what they or others envision it to be. So, if as a writer you want to make money to either supplement your income or earn an income, you might think about other writing paths in addition to authoring books.

One such path is freelance writing.

According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics of the U.S. Department of Labor, “approximately 10.3 million workers in the US (7.4% of the US workforce) are independent contractors. In the past three years, companies have increased their outsourcing by 22% on the internet.”1

These figures are rising every year as more and more businesses realize the necessity of marketing online.

Essentially, a freelance writer is self-employed. He or she looks for magazines that accept submissions or maybe businesses and marketers who are looking for writers, although this area may fall more under ghostwriting which is a form of freelance writing.

Simply put, in a freelance capacity, you will write for pay, whether with a byline or as a ghostwriter, and you will search for entities that are willing to pay for your services.

To get started in this area, you should establish yourself as a freelance writer; this will help you harness paying jobs. The best way to do this is to create a website that is devoted to you as a freelance writer. You may want to blog about topics you excel in, whether marketing, health, business, or other. Show the potential client what you are capable of, and post content on a regular basis.

You will also need to search freelance job boards. You can find job boards by doing an online search. In addition, you might ask writer acquaintances or friends for information in this area, since you want to make sure the job board site is reputable.

Another area to promote your freelance business and expertise is in social networks such as Linkedin, Facebook, and Twitter.

With persistence, you may see you’re first freelance job.

Be careful though, before you accept a job it’s important to know your value; don’t under value your writing talent, or underestimate the work involved in a particular project. Writing a 500 word article for $10 is not the way to go, considering it may take you one to two hours to complete if you need to do research.

Your best course of action is to decide what fee you are willing to write for, and then stick to your guns. Often, once you fall into the writing-for-peanuts-pit, it can become difficult to get out, so seek quality writing jobs.

Once you’ve landed one or more clients, it’s important to manage your time effectively. You will need to put business first and other writing and social networking second. Now, this does not mean you can neglect other aspects of writing, such as working on your next book if you are an author, or marketing your freelance services and marketing your available books, it simply means take care of the writing that brings in an income first.

Next, to generate more business, ask satisfied clients for testimonials and post them on your website. If you are ghostwriting this may be difficult to accomplish, but it doesn’t hurt to ask.

One final note, write quality content no matter what the writing assignment. This effort will lead to long-term clients and referrals.

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Related Articles:

Article Directories and Ghostwriters – Strategies to Save You Time

Tips for Content Subcontracting in Your New Freelance Business

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

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If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
<em>(The books offered may change periodically)</em>

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to:  http://dkvwriting4.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing and Marketing
Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

Posted in Business writing, Freelance Writing, Ghostwriter - Tagged article writing, business writing, freelance writing

Giving Basic Writing Advice

May12
2011
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Recently, I was asked to look over a children’s fiction picture book manuscript. This was not a paying job, just a favor.

The ‘new to writing’ authors, who are both health care professionals, had already been calling major publishers to find out submission requirements. They were told their manuscript would not be looked at without an agent.

So, they went to the library to find a book on top agents. While this is a worthy endeavor, there are some basic first steps to take before shooting for the stars.

Just glancing at the manuscript, I knew it needed a lot of work. And, interestingly, I was surprised to see so many errors in a simple 600 word story. It seems as we progress in learning the craft of writing, we forget that we didn’t know the very basics at one time either.

When critiquing, or giving writing advice, it’s important to begin with the positive aspects of the manuscript. If the errors are basic and abundant, you may also want to state them in generic terms, not to offend the author/s.

What does this mean?

Well, instead of saying, “You shouldn’t have the children’s picture book manuscript formatted in lists, numbered, or in Australian Sunrise 10pt font,” you might say, “Manuscripts are usually preferred typed in New Times Roman 12pt font, and are double spaced using a free form flow with the first sentence of each paragraph indented.

To help with clarity, you could include a first page example of a manuscript you have, or rewrite the 1st paragraph of two of the authors’ manuscript.

If there are just too many errors, for time’s sake you can make a list of proper manuscript formatting tips. This is the approach I took.

I started out with the ‘positive:’

This is a wonderful idea for a children’s book and has great potential, especially that both of you are professionals in the health field. Children will certainly benefit from the story’s information. It could use some tweaking though.

Then I added a brief sentence:

Here are a few tips for writing and formatting a manuscript to help get it submission ready:

• Manuscripts should be formatted in 12 pt Times New Roman Font
• They should be double spaced
• They should be in free form without numbering for pages or in list form
• The first sentence of each paragraph should be indented
• Children love action – actions are better shown through ‘showing’ rather than ‘telling’
• Notes for illustrations after each of your intended pages are usually frowned upon by publishers
• Most publishers, especially the major ones use their own illustrators
• Manuscripts are more likely to make it past the slush pile if they are polished
• Usually writers go through a process of one or two critique
groups and writing groups, after rewrites and editing it gets to a point where it looks perfect. That’s when it needs to be professionally edited.

These tips are part of the advice I offered the authors and I kept it as generic as possible.

After you note the manuscript errors, you should end your advice on another positive note. You might say, “With rewriting and editing, you will have an engaging story that children will be sure to love, and it’ll be submission ready.”

After my comments, I provided links to a few articles about writing for children and editing.

Since every author’s personality is different it’s usually best to use the gentle approach when offering writing advice.

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Related Articles:

Simple as A, B, C: 6 Basic Tips for Writing Children’s Fiction – Part 1
Simple as ABC: 6 Basic Tips for Writing Children’s Fiction – Part 2
Editing Tips: 1-4
Editing Tips: 5-10

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

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Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing for Children and More

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Posted in Freelance Writing, Writing for Children - Tagged children's writer, writing advice, writing for children

Podcasting for Writers Workshop

May06
2011
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I am the founder and manager of Writers on the Move, a group of experienced and new writers/authors of multiple genres who strive to share their combined wealth of writing and marketing knowledge with all, as well as use cross-promotional strategies to increase visibility.

As a NEW feature to the group, Writers on the Move is now offering Workshops on writing and marketing. The first FREE class will be presented by Maggie Ball: Podcasting for Writers; it is scheduled for May 16th at 7pm EST.

Registration is required, so please stop by our blogsite for the details:
http://vbt-writersonthemove.blogspot.com/2011/04/all-new-writers-on-move-workshop.html

Or, email Maggie Ball directly at:
maggieball@compulsivereader.com

Please put “Podcasting Workshop” in the subject box.

After registering you will receive a PDF with a comprehensive outline specifically designed for the class. This will allow you to work on creating a podcast before the class and then ask any questions you may have during the workshop. You will also receive the password to access the chat.

A bit about the workshop:

The simplest definition of a podcast is just a recorded radio show and Maggie will provide the information you need to get your podcast up and running. She’ll define what a podcast is and the many different ways you can either do a single podcast, or start your own “radio show” or even syndication with recorded podcasts.

This will be a very informative workshop for writers who want, rather need to bring their books and/or services to a larger audience. If you’re blogging now, the next step is to create podcasts.

We look forward to seeing you there.

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Marketing Articles:

Writing for Free – A Means to an End
Bypass Marketing and Book Selling
SEO and Marketing – Basic Tips and Definitions

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

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If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing for Children and More

Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

Posted in Marketing - Tagged authors, learn to podcast podcast workshop, Marketing, podcasting, podcasting for writers, podcasts, promotion, writers

Writers on the Move May 2011 Tour

May01
2011
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Along with being an author and ghostwriter, I am the creator and manager of Writer on the Move, a group of authors and writers who use cross-promotion to increase visibility. And each month we have an author/writer tour filled with writing and marketing information from our talented writers and authors.

As usual, we strive to provide value packed informational content so you can not only learn about the authors’ books and services, but also pick up tips and advice on writing, ghostwriting, marketing, and more.

So, look over the schedule below. Each day in May a different author and information will be presented. Just follow the schedule and click on the corresponding day.

And, be sure to stop by to read Dallas Woodburn’s Feature Article on May 18th, “Writing is like Rock Climbing.”

We really appreciate your comments and following.

Writers on the Move’s May 2011 Tour Schedule

1st Karen Cioffi is featuring Deb Eckerling
2nd Kathy Stemke is featuring Maggie Ball
3rd Margaret Fieland is featuring Joe Dadich
4th Carolyn Howard-Johnson is featuring Elysabeth Eldering
5th Stephen Tremp is featuring Jennifer Turner
6th Debra Eckerling is featuring Martha Swirzinski
7th Martha Swirzinski is featuring Jennifer Gladen
8th Heidi Thomas is featuring Virginia Grenier
9th Dallas Woodburn is featuring Mari Taylor
10th Maggie Ball is featuring Kevin McNamee
11th Virginia Grenier is featuring Robert Medak
12th Kevin McNamee is featuring Kathy Stemke
13th Elysabeth Eldering is featuring Carolyn Howard-Johnson
14th Marietta Taylor is featuring Donna McDine
15th Robert Medak is featuring Shelby Patrick
16th Donna McDine is featuring Margaret Fieland
17th Shelby Patrick is featuring Heidi Thomas
18th Jennifer Gladen is featuring Dallas Woodburn
19th Jenny Turner is featuring Karen Cioffi
20th Jennifer Wylie is featuring Stephen Tremp
21st Joe Dadich is featuring Jenny Wylie

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Marketing Articles:

Websites That Work: 7 Key Factors (Part 1)
Websites That Work: 7 Key Factors (Part 2)
SEO and Marketing – Basic Tips and Definitions
5 Marketing Reminders for 2011

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

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If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

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Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing for Children and More

Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

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Posted in Marketing - Tagged author tour, book promotion, Marketing, visibility

Jesus My Son: Mary’s Journal of Jesus’ Early Life

Apr27
2011
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Interestingly, an effective marketing strategy is to hook up with other authors/writers and participate in Joint Ventures (JVs). What this means is if you have a new book coming out and want to reach more than your individual mailing list and social networks, you join forces with writer friends or acquaintances to promote your book for a ONE DAY SPECIAL.

Suppose it’s your new book; you contact one to several authors who might be willing to put your prewritten promo on their sites and social networks, and (THIS IS THE VERY IMPORTANT PART) are willing to provide a freebie to any one who purchases the book on that day.

According to book marketing specialists, Brain Judd and Daniel Hall, this has the potential to put your book on Amazon’s TOP HUNDRED list in one or more categories – just for one day’s promo.

Okay, so here is the JV in practice. I’m participating in Mary Bailey’s April 27th promo for her new book, My Son: Mary’s Journal of Jesus’ Early Life, by offering a FREE bonus gift, How to Create an Ebook and What You Can Do With It.

Dear Friends,

I want to give you the opportunity to win some awesome prizes and receive some valuable gifts. Many partners have joined in this campaign to offer some great bonus gifts. Receive many free book downloads, free music, discounts, and many other products. Liz Lemon Swindle, the artist of Mary’s Heart, the painting on the cover of Jesus My Son, is offering a chance to win a FRAMED PRINT of this lovely painting, a $99.00 value. Feel free to share this offer with your friends and family so they can also enjoy these awesome gifts.

Are you searching for a unique Mother’s Day gift?

Join Mary Bailey on Wednesday, April 27, 2011, for a campaign of her book, Jesus My Son: Mary’s Journal of Jesus’ Early Life. Purchase a hardcopy at Amazon.com from seller MRBent and receive a 35% discount. Also, get immediate access to $100’s worth of valuable free bonus gifts. Enter to win prizes including a framed print of Mary’s Heart, the cover of Jesus My Son. This lovely print is valued at $99.00.

What gift could be more special than a journal written by God’s chosen mother about the everyday activities of the son she shared with our Father? Any mother will enjoy listening to Mary’s heart as she pours out her emotions in her journal entries.

Mary’s journal offers a fresh perspective to a very old story.

A reader writes, “The story, written as if Mary, mother of Jesus, was keeping a journal of her life, drew me in and absorbed me completely from beginning to end.”

Click here to Claim all your Bonus gifts and register to win the prizes just by ordering one book.

Share this amazing offer with your family and friends.

On some browsers, the hyperlink does not work. If it doesn’t, just past this link into your address box.
http://jesusmyson.com/bonus-gifts_288.html

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As a participant in a JV, you will be expected to promote the book in all your social networks – this is a main part of it’s effectiveness.

While it may be a bit time consuming, you are creating visibility for yourself and your promotional product, and you should be able to rely on the pay-it-forward factor for the time you need help with your book.

Pretty much a win-win situation.

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Writing, Publishing, and Marketing – You Can Do It

This 34 page e-book is full of writing, publishing (traditional and self-publishing) and marketing information. Kind of a GPS for getting where you’re headed: published and selling books.

Click on the link for more details and a great review:
http://www.karencioffi.com/writing-publishing-and-marketing/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you haven’t yet, be sure to sign up for my FREE monthly newsletter, A Writers World, and get TWO FREE eBooks:

The Self-Publisher’s Guide, 2nd Edition
The Blogger’s Checklist
(The books offered may change periodically)

In fact, check out the sidebar for two free gifts just for stopping by!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ghostwriting and Editing for Businesses and Individuals
Do you want to get that idea turned into a book? Do you want to write your memoirs? Do you need editing, proofreading, or a professional critique? Do you need an e-book or white paper to offer for instruction, platform visibility, or a gift? Do you need blog, article, white paper, or other form of content visibility for your business? We’re professional, experienced with keywords and SEO, and we cover a number of writing services. So, please stop by and check us out. Go to: http://DKVWriting4U.com

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Until next time,

Karen Cioffi
Author, Ghostwriter, Freelance writer, and
Acquisitions Editor Intern for
4RV Publishing

Member of the Professional Writers Alliance, the International Association of Professional Ghostwriters, and the National Association of Independent Writers and Editors.

http://KarenCioffi.com
http://DKVWriting4U.com
Karen Cioffi Writing for Children and More

Linkedin: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karencioffiventrice
Twitter: http://twitter.com/KarenCV
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/kcioffiventrice

PLEASE SHARE THIS ARTICLE – THANKS!

Posted in Marketing - Tagged book promotion, christian fiction, create visibility, Jesus, Mary Bailey, Mary Jesus mother, promotion
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